Peer review- Ariel’s review

On Ariel’s memoir I felt that it was a really good story. For most of her memoir I felt like I could relate to it with all the detail’s. ( I don’t have a job yet ) but I felt like I could relate to it by all the story’s I hear about work from my friends and family. I did find some words that were spelt correctly, but did not make sense for those certain sentence’s. I really liked the last paragraph on how they made it a better working environment. But overall I found her memoir to be really good and to have great structure to it.

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